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The Trouble With Love

The trouble with love is it never understands me

It never seems to come at the right time

It never came actually.

It finds a way to delay itself and leave me to my thoughts

2 thoughts on “The Trouble With Love

  1. I like the humour in the second line but it could perhaps do with a little more length. The structure left me stumbling a little. Perhaps something like ‘In fact, it never actually came.’ Feel free to ignore me though.

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